Can You Find My Irony?
Sitting here counting shadows on the wallwaiting for you to never callThe solemn feel of foreverpeelslayers of my pride awayacid washedfor contemptive playSo lonely is the solitudethat looms larger...
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Are you and I related?Or do we just have the same lives?A very vivid and outstanding piece.I can relate to this one so well.Panegyrize your poetry at SoulStarz Galaxy
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Calls that never come..hmmm, been there, done that. Wonderfully written Erik, and something we can all relate to.sioux
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yeah, you been peeking at me when i not been looking, too.good one, ERik.moth, minus pride"My eyes are erotic. My intelligence is erotic. All combinations are possible." ~ Goran Sonnevi ~In this very...
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This I also can relate too... I think we've all been there. You expressed this beautifully Erik and I really enjoyed.Beautifully written.Mystic~Mystic~"Never win first place, I don't support the team,...
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Is this the right room, looking for the "call never came" group?Ok, cool, I'll get that chair over against the wall there, thanks.Beautiful writing as always Erik, once again you do a wonderful job of...
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JosetteNot too sure about that...But I am sure that we must have some kinda connectionas we both write our feelings outI am honored you liked this oneERik New Page 1 Cinderella, she seems so easy "It...
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Siouxyes very truea relatable occurancefunny how something like thisrings so true....ERik New Page 1 Cinderella, she seems so easy "It takes one to know one," she smiles And puts her hands in her back...
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"waiting for you to never call" ... hmmmm .. been the story of my life for too damn long now, erik ... I'm still waiting ... perfectly expressed .. love the tone of this ... "Each smallest act of...
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Mothor maybe you were peeking at mepeeking at you....hmmmThanks for the readand the wordsERik New Page 1 Cinderella, she seems so easy "It takes one to know one," she smiles And puts her hands in her...
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Mysticonce again I find myself in a possition to thank you for your very kind commentsI am honored that you continue to readERik New Page 1 Cinderella, she seems so easy "It takes one to know one,"...
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MikeYeah you got the right placecoffee and doughnuts are to the left....ERik New Page 1 Cinderella, she seems so easy "It takes one to know one," she smiles And puts her hands in her back pockets...
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JMLWell ain't it a bitchto wait and waitfor something to never happen?even when you tell yourself this time will be different....sighERik New Page 1 Cinderella, she seems so easy "It takes one to know...
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She swings the door open like she owns the place, grabs a donut and a cup of coffee, juggling the coffee, sugar packs, napkin, and small creamer tubs, makes her way over to an empty chair, trips over...
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Hhehethanks for that responsemade me chuckle out loudnicenessheheGlad that you can't (wink wink)ERik New Page 1 Cinderella, she seems so easy "It takes one to know one," she smiles And puts her hands...
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indeed i can erik.and this is a hopeful and then not so piece here.seenqt."you try keepin' it real, but you should try keepin' it right." --De La
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Hey lovenice to see you tripping into this placeIt is always nice to have your commentsERik New Page 1 Cinderella, she seems so easy "It takes one to know one," she smiles And puts her hands in her...
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We have GOT to stop meeting like this! People are gonna start talking. You caught me with the first stanza, and held me through to the last. I feel this one, Erik. Truly. Great work here. But when...
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Say hey Brandilook at you first QT and now youmy whole WOF fam is showing me some loveI thank you for reading meand flattering the hell out of meERik New Page 1 Cinderella, she seems so easy "It takes...
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